Add, remove, move, and substitute! Use this fun revising strategy to revise a sample essay.

Students will use this fun and colorful revision technique to edit a piece of sample writing.

It’s more fun to revise with a partner! After writing personal narratives, have students share their writing with a partner. Partners should identify at least three parts in the narrative where three descriptive details could be added.

In this paragraph editing page, kids will have a great time editing this love letter from a Victorian gentleman.